Second Draft

This draft basically has all the shots and sounds, but there are still a lot of changes needed to be made. We use this draft to send to our teacher, friends and families to ask for advice and comments. After some constructive criticism we have concluded a list of changes we need to make:

• Fix foley sounds to make them seem more real (reduce volume or remove foley sound)

• Change the second audio to a more climactic music so that the ending would feel more satisfying

• Include fade in for the alarm clock rings

• Raise the volumes of the music to block out other sounds from the real world and pulls the audience closer into the scene

• Make the cuts on beat with the music
  

I'm very thankful for all the comments, these had guided us to further on improve the scene!